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DW - Silly Comic 1 page 2 by Ammosart DW - Silly Comic 1 page 2 by Ammosart
Second page of my Manga Studio practice attempt/dorky Who comic thingie.

Leela is one of my favorite companions. She rocked. I can't even remember why I thought it'd be funny to put Amy in her outfit. But there you go.

For the record, Matt Smith appears to have a ginormous skull and really tricky facial features. Those three little panels in the middle are the main reason this took so long. and now they're shrunk way down. XD I may upload larger sizes of them later, as I finally ended up being fairly happy with them. Multi-panel reactions are not easy! :o I guess I could've just copy/pasted and edited but uhm.. well I no so smrt I guess.

First page here: [link]



*edit I wasn't too pleased with cartoony-Amy's head in the last panel, so I tweaked it a bit.

(Now in color! [link])
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Taylor-the-Weird Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Cute comic! I love your art style - it's very loose, but with great control over the curves, especially in the hair. (As someone whose art is generally more angular and heavy-handed, I really love stuff with elegant curves) I also love how you drew Matt Smith's face. God - that man has such an interesting head to draw...

The only critique that I can give is that if you plan to keep it uncolored, you might want to incorporate some more black into it - at first glance, the white-ness seems to overtake the darks. But I'm just nitpicking. Overall, lovely work!
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Clean inking is something still sort of new for me - I tend to be pretty sketchy. I'll redo a hair line many many times before I'm happy, don't even ask me how many times I redrew the Doctor's hair ;) So I really appreciate that!

Thank you very much for that bit of crit! As I start to attempt more sequential art (well and all of my art in general as well), I've been trying to work on use of contrast, and keeping that in mind as I draw. I've still a lot to learn, however. I do hope to color this - I've already started the first page. But whether or not I finish is always up in the air *laughs*. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll definitely be keeping that in mind.
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:icontaylor-the-weird:
Taylor-the-Weird Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
No problem - I do a lot of comic-styled art, myself, and I've got a real thing about balance between lights and darks in black-and-white stuff. I guess a lot of people are a kinda afraid of ink.

I know what you mean about clean inking - I still have trouble with it, and I've been practicing since junior high. It looks good, though. You've obviously got talent!
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RMan021 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2010
Oh my giddy aunt!

At leats she didn't dress up as Sarah Jane circa 'The Hand of Fear'.
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:iconammosart:
Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hah! We'll just pretend it ended up in one of the crumpled reject piles on the floor :)
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Carnivius Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
I bet she'd look almost as adorable as SJ did though. =)
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm pretty sure Amy's one of those "disgusting" types that can make nearly anything look good somehow. >_> *sulks*
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Carnivius Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
:hug:
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strayspoon42 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
Amy in Leela's old outfit???

DELICIOUS!!!!!
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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strayspoon42 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
you know it to be true!
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onegemini Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Professional General Artist
Very fun connector, these two pages.

How'd your Manga Studio try-out turn out? What do you think of it? Pete Woods switched from Photoshop to MS, and I'm thinking of trying it myself.
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I like to draw stuff that makes me laugh, and hopefully others as well.

I really enjoyed using MS. I've never really used PS all that much (I've mostly used Painter up to this point), so I can't comment on specific changes. I was very pleased with how fast it was to put the panels together neatly, and making word balloons and doing the lettering very quickly. I'm also using MS Ex, so I'm not sure which all features it may have that MS Debut does not. I liked the idea of having an entire story stored page-by-page. I will definitely keep using it, I feel it really helped speed up the whole process for me.
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Carnivius Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
Nice work. The likeness of Smith on this page looks a lot closer than that on the first page. Nice art style too.
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! I was quite a bit more comfortable with the idea of where I wanted to go with him in my style by this page. It's what I get for not doing a few practice sketches beforehand. :)
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Carnivius Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
Am sure any more comics will look even better now you've got his face sorted. Great work =)
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Angel-of-the-doctor Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Student General Artist
I love the last panel! :love:
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It was a lot of fun, believe me :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Angel-of-the-doctor Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Student General Artist
haha I can tell. ^^
No prob.
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MrsNox Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:rofl: His FACE!!! :lmao: This is brilliant as always. Amy looks amazing. :heart:
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks hun, glad you enjoyed it :D
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Texas-Guard-Chic Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You capture the Doctor's expressions so well! :D LOOOOVE IT.
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Ammosart Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Phew, thanks.. I was worried! *laughs*
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